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"Parts of this site are highly addictive...Symptoms to look out for: Bunnies hallucinations, pecan syrup cravings, rapidly improving eye-sight and increased velocity of movements, itchy eye-glaze, watermelon withdrawal or hearing voices telling you you're not fit to carry a symbiote ...These should be dealt with immediately to prevent further damage...A daily dose of BEYOND DEATH (see Homepage)is the recommended treatment by the SGC compendium."
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Great site !!!!!!!
:o)..

 - Mireille, slave to Garnet, BMW (BunnyMobile worshipper) 26 June 00

Well, now, you see, you gave me a podium to speak my ... mind. *whistles* Come back, come back. Obsession wouldn't even begin to describe what I'm suffering from, so here's a few more words -- fascination, adoration, fixation and complete and utter derangement. Ahh, look, pink, fluffy bunnies. Suggestions? Ah, a wee request for us J/A shippers -- one kiss does not constitute a fulfilled fantasy, 'kay? *eg* Action, action! Oh, and as for all the other addictive characters ... you should open a cloning factory of your own. ... Agh, a small proposal for us S/D shippers (Gods, I should get a freakin' wallet for all these shipper cards) ... elevators ... they have elevators in Florida. *veg* I shall leave you with my priceless words of wisdom. Love ya and your extraordinary work!

 - Garnet's Trophy and Roommate 26 June 00

I'm LOVING it. It keeps me on my seat ALL the time. I love the story but have just 1 little pick...(SORRY) but Martouf's writing kinda blends in with the background and is a little hard to see. Other than that WOW!!!

 - Minnie_Me 14 July 00

i finally got to access the fanfic i've been trying to for how long... and in the prossess found this brilliant site..... is that "his" <bows in reverence at the feet of JR himself<giggles>> writing wonders after reading another entry to the gustbook ???

 - Kaz of Malkshur 20 Aug 00

I love it all!!! =]

 - Frances = ] 30 Aug 00

It isn't done. OOOOHHHHH how I hate to have to wait.

 - Daeste-Dawn of the morning sun 14 Sept 00

*Little A hangs her mouth open in amazement* Words cannot describe the feelings I get when I read Beyond Death, I can never wait for the next part. I especially like the flashing pictures of the characters.

 - Little A 5 Oct 00

Okay...OMG! i lost my puter and then i reopened beyond death, caught up to speed on everything and now i dont know wether to laugh or cry, it's so good, and definatly not whti expected...OMG it's GREAT, it's like a drug, you need mor e and more...sorry still in shock
Luv Kylie

 - Kylie 28 Oct 00

Well, it is an awesome story. HOwever,
sometimes the font color blends in with the screen.
And also, please, finish the book.
I am very inpatient and need to know what
is going to happen. This book rules and so does
Stargate SG-1!!

 - Anna 23 Nov 00

I think you are writing about some completely different characters than are used on the TV show. I read about three parts, and disliked the characters so much I couldn't go any further. The writing is OK, the format is kind of annoying, and the OC's are somewhat annoying as well. Sorry I can't be more positive in my comments, but I wanted to tell you what I think

- anonymous 10 Dec 00.

The URL I looked at was

http://s1ra.tripod.com/SG1/LD1-1.html except I logged in around page 40.

I have no idea where that is on your website, because there was nothing to tell me.

I am not going to try reading to the end of the story because if you can't indicate who's speaking except by colour-coding the dialogue, it's not worth my time. (Also, if you can't think of any better way of indicating which of several kinds of telepathy is in use except by different numbers of asterisks, you shouldn't bother having telepathic characters at all.)

- Master Neill 12 Feb 01

I'm sure the story is great. However, the formatting is just too confusing to read.
There are far too many characters to keep track of who is saying what without having to constantly refer back to the title page.
I got lost after the first page. Some of the colors blend into the background, making it very difficult if not impossible to read what they are saying.
I would STRONGLY recommend dumping the color coding. It's hard on the eyes and discourages readers from actually reading your story.
At least, it's keeping me from reading it and I'll read just about anything.

- Siren 12 Feb 01